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Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Wh3N i W0Ke Up & sTOPped dReAMIng

this is a poem i wrote ...
i hope u'll like it...

Remember the rain
And how i wet myself
I wanted it all for myself
But it was the first smile i saw
That changed me ...

There's nothin to remember
Nor nothin to forget
Though u'll never know
How much this quiet hurts me

One day u'll see
Perhaps laugh
Because yes , i agree
That I've been foolish and childish
I've been dreaming for too long
BUT

Today i woke up .....

6 comments:

-S- said...

"u" who?

~VaiSh~ said...

huh???
i dun und. la...:(
hehe

~VaiSh~ said...

ohh ya i forgot to ask..
nice ah ???

-S- said...

Nor nothin to forget
Though "u'll" never know
How much this quiet hurts me

One day "u'll" see
Perhaps laugh
Because yes , i agree
That I've been foolish and childish

who's the "u"?

and....it's VERY nice...

~VaiSh~ said...

ohh
there's no who...
its just a person...
no one in particular...
y u never come online.....:(

-S- said...

ooooo.....will come tonite...